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While the boat was flying, I fekt dizzy and uncomfortable. Although it landed back on the gorund, it splashed and capsized on impact. I capsized with the hovercraft. (Since I was dizzy from flying, I died) (took this part out to add promote further learning and add to the writing)
After I capsized I fell very hard to the water. It was so cold and at the bottom of the water, there was seaweed. Unitl I saw an underwater view, I had just thought it was fish or something like that. (added parts using AAAWWUBBIS)

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